ok, I am REALLY, REALLY EXCITED RIGHT NOW.
just 10 minutes ago, I texted my boyfriend, then I was staring at the screen and the two texts, rhymed, and sounded awfully poetic. an idea was brewing up in my mind, I got out google keep and started writing a poem, AND GUESS WHAT? I AM SO EFFING HAPPY WITH IT!
LIKE, OHMIGOSH!! I WROTE A POEM UNDER 10 MINUTES???
AND THIS IS SO PRETTY I JUST FEEL LIKE HOLDING IT AND RUNNING AROUND IN CIRCLES. I AM SO SO SO SO SO SO HAPPY ABOUT THE POEM, LIKE, SO HAPPY. AND SO EXCITED TO SHOW YOU ALL, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT YOU THINK OF IT.
another reason why I’m so happy is, because in this poem I see the potential of a song, and I have tried SO many times to write a song and failed all those times.
ok
*deep breath*
HERE’S THE POEM. I HOPE YOU LOVE IT. IF YOU DON’T WE CAN’T BE FRIENDS BYE.
hello?
gorgeous person who is mine,
appear now, it’s time
i’ve been daydreaming forever.
looking for a happily ever afterand i scoffed and rolled my eyes,
when these silly girls, were talking
about their shining ‘knights’
but now, I can’t stop wonderingwhere are you, mr right?
aren’t you the one,
who’s supposed to hold me tight
so why am I missing out the fun,i never cared about materials,
never made up myself for
someone new, someone else,
my mother, who I adore,
told me these matters
can’t be rushed,
that I’ll find someone
when the time comesbut now,
the clocks all are breaking,
they’re all watching,
I’m standing here, waiting,
and you’re nowhere in sight,
oh where are you, mr right?and you’d know all the solutions
to all my misery and problems
and you’ll make a bad day good
we’ll go camping in the woods.where are you, mr right?
aren’t you the one,
who’s supposed to hold me tight
so why am I missing out the fun,i always thought,
SEP – 10/5/2022
i’d find someone,
i always thought,
it’s be like the rom coms
but real life is messy,
but I’ll be riding solo,
until mr right,
turns up in my life
as you know, I’ve already found my mr right, ππ
guys!!!! I’m crying, this is probably my best work…and I might be overrreacting, but AH. LOVE IT. LOVE THIS.
oh and I had my science exam today, it was good.
LET’S GET BACK TO TALKING ABOUT THE POEM.
ALL I WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT THE POEM.
COMMENTS. NOW.
sorry about the general chaotic-ness of this post.
π€π½π€π½π€π½

β¨immaculateβ¨
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OOOOH CHEF’S KISS OOOOOOOUI.
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Damn this Mr Right must be a lucky guy! I want to be him now
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of course you do, but that spot’s already taken. : D
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LOVED ITTTT this should definitely be a song… ππ
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thank you so much mwahhhh!!
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You’re welcome!!!! π₯°
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Nice poem Sep!
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THANK YOU!
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it really felt like a TS song you know, I just got that vibe from the beginning
your mr. right should definitely read this!
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omg that is such a compliment, thank you!! ah yes, he will ZD.
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Baapreπ
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arre kya? ZD
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i literally opened my email to send a text. i did not expect this thingy. blog post.
cheesy stuff isn’t really my thing but i’ll take that. its good sep, its good.
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XD. I love being unexpected.
it’s not cheesy!! this is so uncheesy, the bit after the poem is cheesy, but the poem itself has NO CHEESE WHATSOEVER.
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everything is cheesy to me. for some reason.
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this is such an incredible poem! less than 10 minutes?? wow! also it sounds like a really cool song lyrics too ππ
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thank you so so so much!!!! I could hug all you guys in the comment right now fdJSHAJ
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haha I would hug you back! ππ₯°
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All I can say is, this feels like sthing that deserves to be on Taylor Swift’s next album β¨
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OH MY GOD THANK YOU SO MUCH. I LOVE THAT. I APPRECIATE IT TO DAYLIGHT AND BACK. THANK YOU!!
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WHAT A POEM!
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THANK YOU!!
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Literally like a song . Appreciate it π
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thank you!!
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DUDEEE THIS IS AMAZING, I FEEL LIKE THIS HAS THE VIBE OF MR PERFECTLY FINE LIKEE
wow
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AWWW thank you!!
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Beautiful! You should totally make this into a song.
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thank you so much naomi!!
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Ok wow!!
Add a part where the guy searches for ms right and bam! you have a durt worthy of Taylor and Louis singing itπ
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OOOH THAT SOUNDS SO NICE. ohmygosh I would absolutely DIE if that happened!
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Not sure what I enjoyed more – the poem or your excitement about it! Thanks for sharing such a personal poem. Loved it.
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this is soo adorable. thank you!!
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OMG THIS IS SO GOOD! LIKE SERIOUSLY, WHAT A POEM SEP!
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thank you krisha!!!
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brooo the poem is soo goood, cant believe you wrote it under 10 minutesππππ
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awwwwwwwwwwww thank you so much!!
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THIS IS SO COOL!
I’m glad you have a Mr. Right!
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heheehehhe thank you D!
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Ok but mr right song when???? This could def be a song – give me the vibs of a guitar-y song (idk does that make sense? Basically it should have a guitar in the instrumental haha)
AND ITS SO WELL WRITTEN I AGREE WIH EVERYONE WHO SAID I GIVES TS VIBESSSSS
under ten minutes? i smell talent. You go girllll πβ¨
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mr right song as soon as I get done with exams from hell. thank you so much geet!!
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waiting for it!! lmk if you need help ;w π€
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Ahhh this is seriously so goooodd!! And in under 10 minutes!! Demmm. As everyone is saying these def felt like song lyricsss! Ur Mr. Right is lucky and u too! β‘β‘
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awww thank you!!
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this-
THIS-
COULD TOTALLY BE A SONG AAAA
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thank you maggie!!
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Beautiful poem ! Did you recite it before your Mr. Right! ππ Well shared very emotional.
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hehe
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Ha ha ππ
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wow this was sooo lovelyπ₯°π <33 romantic
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thank you!!
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You’ve got yours but we are waiting for ours π.
Awesome poem!!
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that rhymes. thank you!
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It doesn’t really but ok
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It’s so beautiful! It’d definitely pass for an amazing song!π₯°π
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thank you!!
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ahhhhhhhhh sighing inside that like melted my heart and brain!!!!!π!!!!!!!! beautiful…
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thank you! welcome to bookishlyyours!
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also OMG you write poetry just like my friend!!!!
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maybe I am your friend……dum dum dummmmmm
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