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guys, omigosh, a POEM!! PRESENTING MR. RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

ok, I am REALLY, REALLY EXCITED RIGHT NOW.

just 10 minutes ago, I texted my boyfriend, then I was staring at the screen and the two texts, rhymed, and sounded awfully poetic. an idea was brewing up in my mind, I got out google keep and started writing a poem, AND GUESS WHAT? I AM SO EFFING HAPPY WITH IT!

LIKE, OHMIGOSH!! I WROTE A POEM UNDER 10 MINUTES???

AND THIS IS SO PRETTY I JUST FEEL LIKE HOLDING IT AND RUNNING AROUND IN CIRCLES. I AM SO SO SO SO SO SO HAPPY ABOUT THE POEM, LIKE, SO HAPPY. AND SO EXCITED TO SHOW YOU ALL, I NEED TO KNOW WHAT YOU THINK OF IT.

another reason why I’m so happy is, because in this poem I see the potential of a song, and I have tried SO many times to write a song and failed all those times.

ok

*deep breath*

HERE’S THE POEM. I HOPE YOU LOVE IT. IF YOU DON’T WE CAN’T BE FRIENDS BYE.

hello?
gorgeous person who is mine,
appear now, it’s time
i’ve been daydreaming forever.
looking for a happily ever after

and i scoffed and rolled my eyes,
when these silly girls, were talking
about their shining ‘knights’
but now, I can’t stop wondering

where are you, mr right?
aren’t you the one,
who’s supposed to hold me tight
so why am I missing out the fun,

i never cared about materials,
never made up myself for
someone new, someone else,
my mother, who I adore,
told me these matters
can’t be rushed,
that I’ll find someone
when the time comes

but now,
the clocks all are breaking,
they’re all watching,
I’m standing here, waiting,
and you’re nowhere in sight,
oh where are you, mr right?

and you’d know all the solutions
to all my misery and problems
and you’ll make a bad day good
we’ll go camping in the woods.

where are you, mr right?
aren’t you the one,
who’s supposed to hold me tight
so why am I missing out the fun,

i always thought,
i’d find someone,
i always thought,
it’s be like the rom coms
but real life is messy,
but I’ll be riding solo,
until mr right,
turns up in my life

SEP – 10/5/2022

as you know, I’ve already found my mr right, πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

guys!!!! I’m crying, this is probably my best work…and I might be overrreacting, but AH. LOVE IT. LOVE THIS.

oh and I had my science exam today, it was good.

LET’S GET BACK TO TALKING ABOUT THE POEM.

ALL I WANT TO TALK ABOUT IT THE POEM.

COMMENTS. NOW.

sorry about the general chaotic-ness of this post.

56 thoughts on “guys, omigosh, a POEM!! PRESENTING MR. RIGHT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. i literally opened my email to send a text. i did not expect this thingy. blog post.

    cheesy stuff isn’t really my thing but i’ll take that. its good sep, its good.

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    1. XD. I love being unexpected.

      it’s not cheesy!! this is so uncheesy, the bit after the poem is cheesy, but the poem itself has NO CHEESE WHATSOEVER.

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  2. Ok but mr right song when???? This could def be a song – give me the vibs of a guitar-y song (idk does that make sense? Basically it should have a guitar in the instrumental haha)
    AND ITS SO WELL WRITTEN I AGREE WIH EVERYONE WHO SAID I GIVES TS VIBESSSSS
    under ten minutes? i smell talent. You go girllll 😌✨

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  3. Ahhh this is seriously so goooodd!! And in under 10 minutes!! Demmm. As everyone is saying these def felt like song lyricsss! Ur Mr. Right is lucky and u too! β™‘β™‘

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