
I remember the way
You were looking at me that day
Like you wanted
To cherish, love and hold meSo you asked me out
Told me you loved me
Told me to abandon all doubt
Told me it was so obvious
How could I ever not see?Well, so I trusted you
And gave you my all
Oh but I had no clue
I broke down all my walls
All for you.And then today happened
You said hello and vanished
Left me all alone with a stranger
Should’ve known you were a dangerBut I didn’t give up on us
No, not yet
Didn’t start a fuss
Planned to give you another chance
Would’ve said yes
If you asked me to danceBut you didn’t
You left my high and dry
Is this the you that was hidden?Tell me,
When my eyes asked you ‘why’
Why did you ignore them?Left me standing at the corner
Standing with your friends
Left my hand cold
Among peals of laughterYou know,
Everyone could see
How much I wanted you to be with me
Everyone told you, to at least respect me
But you had to go and get embarrassed
Oh well, nevermind, just answer this
Did you ever love me?
Or was that a façade?
Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.
Well well well.
I was supposed to post on friday wasn’t I.
But I had to go have an evening out with friends (and Mr Editor!!).
Don’t read too much into this poem people, it’s partly based on real life experiences.
You know what. When you make a plan, damn well stick to it.
That’s all I’m going to say. I DO NOT want to go on full rant mode here.
That’s a conversation for my diary and me.
Well! Monday motivation! Have a great week peopleeeeeeeeeeeee.
Byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Sep
Nice one….keep writing poems today and wish me luck 🙄
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Good luck! Tell him good luck too
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Yess miss.. cue two finger salute
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👀
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??
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¯\_(ツ)_/¯
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Huh??
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I’m just trying to confuse and/or annoy you and I am SUCCEEDING
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I see. I thought you were questioning why I wrote this poem. 😶
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Nice one
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Thank you!
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Arre haan yaar. Good luck.
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That ws supposed to be a reply na ?
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Yup
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wow this is really nice sep ❤️❤️
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Thank you Nushy Bushy!!
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Okay, this is giving me a little bit of I knew you were trouble + champagne problems vibes 😂😍
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That is a great compliment 😄. I like this poem tho, and the fact that I wrote this in one sitting is making me PROUD.
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You should be!
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This was really feeling like a Taylor swift song at once 😁
And its base on real life issues, so you ok?
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*based
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And that image was looking AMAZING 🤩
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Thank you!!
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AHH! Thank you!
Of course I am. I’m tougher than the narrator of this poem. Also I exaggerate a lot in poems 🤣🤣
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WELcome!
😂😂
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I exaggerate a lot on daily bases, everyday😅
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Me too 🤣🤣. When I’m telling an incident to a third person 🤣🤣
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WHO HURT SEP FOR HER TO WRITE THIS POEM☺️🔪🔪
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ZD. Nobody. Evin dear, I exaggerate a lot. ZD
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okay then👀
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AMAZING POEM, BUT YES I ASK SAME QUESTION AS EVIN
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ZD.
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…..
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This was…
I am trying to think of a good compliment because this was really good, but my brain isn’t working. Know that this poem left wowed. =)
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Omigosh thank you!!
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DAM!
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WHAM! BAM!
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Its amazing 👌. I don’t have any word which is good enough to praise this poem.
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Thank you!
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DaYuM
this one’s nice.
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Thank you!
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Amazing one🤗!
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Thank you!!
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This is amazing! Definitely “raw and beautiful”
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Thank you so much Rowan!
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This feels like a olivia x taylor song! soo good!
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Thank you so much AK17!!
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