Everyone has eyes.
But do they really see? What you hide so well, deep beneath?
Does a small glance convey, words that were never said, words that’ll never be said?
Do eyes tell you of a long lost smile?
Betrayed by friends, a face turned vile?
Does the colour change, perhaps?
After hurt comes with mishaps?
They say ‘look at that gorgeous smile, oh what a lovely child’.
While I say, look at the eyes.
A thousand unspoken words shine in the wild.
‘Cause everyone has eyes. It just depends on what you see.

(Inspired by my eyes, that I look into while wearing contacts. ZD)
Hey you guysssss. This wasn’t quite a normal post was it? It’s pretty deep for a Monday morning. I actually wrote it a few weeks ago, and I was really proud of it, so I thought I’ll share it here.
Actually, for some reason (probably my brain believing it has achieved wisdom) I keep on drafting beautiful prose in my mind while listening to music. So I was thinking about doing a series, where I start off by a song lyric and then write my views on it? I already have two ideas for theseeeeeeeee. I have no name of the series, as of yet. But we’ll be having it every Friday.
Do tell me what you thought about this. I am so nervous putting this out for all of you to see (no pun intended).
See you all on Monday!!
(pun intended here tho)

Oh why were you nervous, Sep? This is beautifullllllllllllll. And true. **applause** I love it! π
(It also reminds me about Shabh’s eye “”””reveal””””)
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I was nervous because, I relate to it sooooo much. YOU’RE CLAPPING FOR ME? WOAH.
* laughs * Epic that was, wasn’t it.
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Yes, Sep, I was clapping for you. Once-in-a-lifetime thing, don’t get used to it. π€
Oh yes very epic. π
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You’re sooo doing it again.
zD.
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Let’s wait and see then, shall we?
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yepepepepepep
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Nice, I loved it, so relatable π
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This comment seems waaaaay to nice for you Narwhale. Is there something I’m not seeing?π€
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Why, do you think I’m that bad π€§
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*shrugs*
You aren’t my sarcastic twin for nothing.
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We’re sarcastic twins!? π
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Didn’t knoww?
Instead of chopping each other to win the Royal title..we could be twins
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Yeah exactly, let’s share the pleasure π
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Yeppp
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Of course, you two are the sarcasm twin queens, and I’m the goddess.
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No honey, you’re not π
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Lie to yourself all you want, honey.
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Ok
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π
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zD
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Hehe
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Blah blah blah
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Whyβs this not a book review??
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Because I keep on forgetting to write them.
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And you come up with this? Bravo.
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Welllll yes.
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This poem is beautifully written and so true…
‘A thousand unspoken words shine in the wild.’ – This was my most favorite line!
Oooo yay I’m waiting for your ‘Song lyric reviews’ series!! Sounds exciting!
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Thank you!!
Awww, I’m glad you like it!
It’s actually song lyric deep prose kindof thingyy..not exactly a review.
But yes, hope you all like it!
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This is so nice. This is different from your usual write ups and it’s just beautiful
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Thank you!!
Yep, that’s true. I was so nervous putting this out here tho π€―
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You should write like this more frequentlyππ€
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You’re definitely seeing more of that on here
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YOU WROTE A POEM!!! ITS SO GOOD!!!!! AND SO BEAUTIFUL!!!
WELL DONE!!!
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THANK YOU!
I’M PROUD YOU’RE PROUD OF ME!!
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Wow! That’s a wonderful poem! Why were you nervous? It’s really good and true!!
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Thanks Betty!
ππ
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WOW
I AM SORRY, I NEED TO RECOVER FROM THIS AWESOMENESS TO WRITE A BETTER COMMENT
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*blinks*
Reallyyyyyyy? I’m so happy reading this AK17.
: ))))))))) Thank you!!!!!!
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Amazing poem! You should share more poetry!
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Thank you Rowan! And welcome here! I definitely will be sharing more now that I received such adorable response from you all!
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Wowww!! This is fantastic!! So amazing!!π
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Thanks Filarance!!π
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My pleasure, Sep
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Oh wow that poem is awesome and really good! You shouldn’t be nervous to share cuz that was amazing.
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Thank you Alaine for appreciating it! I am sooo happy it was received well! Welcome around here!π
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Omygosh thank you sooo much!! I look forward to reading more of your awesome posts. π
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Nice π And I like that song lyric idea, even though I probably don’t know most of your music…
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Thank you Greg! I’m so sorry for missing out on your comment, I guess it just slipped my mind.
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No problem π
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wow i love your poetry, you should definitely share more of them:)) its truly a beautiful poem<3
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Thank you Arwaaaaa!
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This is literally the most beautiful thing I’ve read today
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Omigosh, thank you!!!
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You should write more poetry girl! Listen to this trelawney like frnd. I do predict much. But like her, some things do come true. And the fog, the tea leaves and all the other related stuff are showing u and poetry. I had actually seen u, eyes and lines inside the crystal ball just last week!
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*looks around*
*whispers*
There’s one coming out tomorrow! Oh I see, guess your tea leaves know I’m writing tons more proses.
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Yes, my child! I knew about it. I knew you would comment this comment tooπ
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zD zD.
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Very beautiful and well-written! And so true! The truth of the person is always in the eyes! π
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Thank you Cherie!
Welcome to bookishlyyours!
(I’m sooo pretending this doesn’t sound cheesy)
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LOLOL It doesn’t sound cheesy at all, Sep! I like the title! And you’re very welcome. π
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WOW! I loved it. Beautifully expressed and heartfelt writing. You have a great way with words. Awesome..!
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Thank you!! Aww, that’s so sweet. Thanks Jahnavi.
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